Wednesday, 18 April 2012

My Reflection on Like The Greeks



Reflection on
 Like The Greeks




Inspiration for Like The Greeks
I undertook Like the Greeks, “A play for the artist and the philosopher in each of us”, after having a dream in which I was descending an ancient stone staircase at the side of a precipice, absolutely terrified. Finally I came to an alcove wherein there were the stone heads carved out of the rock, like the ancient depictions of Sophocles, Aristophanes and the great philosophers of Ancient Greece:
I knew that the stairs led down to Athens.



The Idea of the Great Man and the title.
I took the Ancient Greeks to symbolise a desire to be a historical figure who had an impact on the evolution of human thought and that prompted me to write on the subject. I thought a good start would be a struggling playwright who was trying to come to terms with his role in the world while simultaneously alienating it, or more specifically, those around him.
Throughout the play the idea of being a Great Man, an influential figure in the history of art or philosophy, is signified by the term of being “Like The Greeks.” It was interesting to work with this signifier as I had been reading on Hegel and his idea that there is "World Spirit" (Weltgeist) which guides humanities evolution through the spirits of Great Men who, through their actions, change the world and this fit rather excellently with the ideas I already had to work with. The fact that Hegel was a huge classicist and very much into “The Greeks” was a charming coincidence I was very pleased with, he did my work for me by referring to them in his own writing, and in turn Franz, the protagonist, decides to write a play based on Hegel’s (relatively famous) Master and Slave Dialectic in order to expiate his own feeling of powerlessness and desire to ‘rise up’ from his self-imposed slavery and achieve his potential.
In my dream, when I reached the bottom of the staircase I found myself in a venue where a rock band was playing a very intimate show. They were not on high above their audience. I text my then-girlfriend, “I’m in Athens! So now I can be a Greek like I always wanted!! Papa Roach are playing, I feel like it’s meant to be!”
In the morning when I messaged her to relay the dream she mentioned that she had been listening to the same band all day the day before. This seemed eerily like what the psychoanalyst Karl Jung, who was very into dream interpretation, would call a ‘synchronicity’ - the experience of events that are apparently causally unrelated and unlikely to occur together, occurring together by chance in seemingly a meaningful manner.

               In the final scene when Franz offers ex-partner Mary a part in a play he has written, he gives her character the name of Sophia, the Greek word for wisdom. The origin of the choice derives from Jungian psychology where the unconscious female aspect of a male, the anima, goes through four stages of evolution. Eve (as from genesis) deals with the emergence of a male's object of desire, Helen (as of Troy) is capable of worldly success and of being self-reliant, intelligent and insightful, but has lacks in internal qualities such as virtue, faith or imagination. Mary (as in the Virgin) who possesses virtue by the perceiving male, and ultimately Sophia, in which complete integration has occurred, allowing females to be seen and related to as particular individuals who possess both positive and negative qualities. Indeed when Franz bestows the part of Sophia upon Mary it is a symbol of his having gone from seeing her as merely someone virtuous, a means to his own ends, to a person in her own right.
               It is worthy of note that I was completely unaware of Jung’s theory when I chose the name Mary for her (she was named after Mary Shelly who was an inspiration to Percy Shelly and Byron) it was a mere matter of coincidence that Sophia turned out to be a Greek name and so I chose it for the character in the play that Franz would write as it gave me the needed link for last two lines of dialogue which I had delineated from the very beginning:

MARY. Like the Greeks?
FRANZ. Like the Greeks.
Exeunt.
               I see something of a parallel between Jung’s theory of the collective unconscious (the idea that below our unconscious there is a deeper level of mind which links all of consciousness) and Hegel’s belief in the Weltgeist. If we could ever conceive of such a supernatural force existing I would have to say I felt synchronicities were on my side in the process of writing. This idea found its own home within the play when Franz, a dedicated atheist, unexpectedly declares: “In the moment of creation it is as difficult for an artist to be an atheist as it is for a philosopher to believe in God,” referringhis feeling that, while in the element of writing, that there is something greater than oneself pushing things along.



Sunday in the Park with George
Not long after I had conceived of the concept of Like The Greeks I was working at The Edinburgh Fringe as a theatre critic where I saw the musical Sunday in the Park with George. I saw some parallels between it and my project, as it is about a painter who alienates his significant other by being grumpy, self-obsessed and blind to her needs, but I wanted to use my play as an opportunity to examine the psychological aspects of the characters involved and address some philosophical questions regarding art, and the relationship between oneself and the other.
It was not my aim to romanticise a difficult personality type or make excuses for it, but to expose it. Franz begins with severe writer’s block, unlike George, who paints prolifically. This is, in part, because Franz is extrinsically motivated, he cares that people will find his work insightful, masterful, ground-breakingly original, &c., while George simply feels the desire to paint and acts upon it. Indeed evidence shows that the imposition of external motivations leads to a decline in the ability to motivate oneself intrinsically (such as in Dweck, C. S. (1999) “Self-Theories – Their Role in Motivation, Personality and Development”, Columbia University.)


Art for Art’s Sake
An important theme within the play is the idea of Art as ‘ends-driven’ (by the desire for credibility, acclaim, fame, influence, &c.) versus the desire to pursue art purely as a means of self-expression. Franz describes himself as torn between two elements of his personality:

               “On one side of me is a poet who wants to create work of indescribably beauty and bliss. One who couldn’t give a rotten damn about what anyone else may think or say on it. On the other side of me is a philosopher. A great intellectual who wants to influence everyone he meets, startling them with revelation and epiphany. An innovator. A revolutionary - turning everything he touches into gold. I’m just a poet trying to play philosopher and playwright all in one breath, that’s the trouble.”

               ‘Like the Greeks,’ Franz wants to be a great man with his own place etched out in history, while Mary, his partner, prompts him to write whatever occurs to him while not assessing it too deeply at first glance and to prize quality over originality. Indeed it is when Franz decides that he should write for his own fulfillment that he finally finds it easy to achieve all that he wants, both artistically and philosophically. He places the poet first, but rather than abandon the philosopher he reconciles these two aspects of his personality by making philosophy the ally of art:

               The poet designs clothes for the philosopher to wear, and if no one sees past their charm to what is truly being said, more fool them! He’s still all too glad for the attention.”

               At the last, the play is about Franz coming to see his creativity being worthy in its own right rather than an accessory  to his ego, and through that process also coming to see Mary as ‘Sophia,’ worthy in her own right.


Suffering for your Art
Throughout the play we see Franz constantly, as he puts it, “at war” with himself. Towards the end of the play he has a monologue which is the turning point of his character. He considers the fact that so many great artists (“great men”) suffered so greatly in their lives: Dostoevsky, Beethoven, Van Gough and Coleridge are some of his examples. He wonders whether their lives of suffering were worth creating some of the greatest works of all time and considers the fact that in some way their suffering makes the story of their lives more compelling. This is when he realises that all that remains is for him to ensure that he always acts in such a way that he can be proud of, as though he were the hero of his own story.


The Evolution of Mary and the Ethics of Like The Greeks
The character of Mary matures long before Franz does. The first step in the matter is realising that her relationship with Franz is unfulfilling to her and brings her more sorrow than joy. While Franz expresses the will to write about morality, she is interested in preserving her virtue in practical terms, and says:

The saint who sacrifices self in the service of others becomes no longer worthy of the title of saint, for has he not spilled innocent blood though it be his own? Cultivating a bitterness in pursuit of a virtue leaves no virtue to speak of.”

When she breaks up with him reiterates the sentiment: “I have only so much good will to spare and I think its best we spent some time apart.” In other words she has realized that she does not like who she is becoming as a consequence of being together with him, she is unhealthily co-dependent and is substituting encouraging him for pursuit of her own aspirations, she wants to create a better life for herself, “I owe it to myself to consider how I’d like to spend my own future.”
She is being ignored at work and she's being ignored by Franz. She leaves him and would no doubt soon leave her job too.    While Franz is too self-involved to be aware of the needs of others, she manages to identify exactly what she thinks love is and would desire from a relationship, “Love isn’t just something you say you feel… it’s something you do! Love is attention. If you don’t give the correct attention your feeling is a bird without wing. Your love doesn’t nurture.”



Foreshadowing and self-reference within Like The Greeks
It was important to me to try to write something that was clever and worked on many levels. The continental philosopher Theodor Adorno believed that good art was constantly cognisant of the whole and worked with its own material immanently rather than evolving in a vacuum with no self-awareness. I agree deeply on this point and long before I was aware of those writings what impressed me in fiction was good foreshadowing, when themes that could have seemed of little significance when first occurring came to greater prominence later in the work or reoccurred in unexpected way. This approach is easily exemplified by “Chekov’s gun,” a literary technique whereby an apparently irrelevant element is introduced early in the story whose significance becomes clear later in the narrative.
There are a number of subtle examples of this within the script, but for brevity I will only discuss two. The first and most significant occurs at the beginning:

FRANZ. How’s the café been?
MARY. The same as ever really, people hear but don't listen. Now and then someone asks me to play the moonlight or sends over a drink, but only because they like the way I look. Were it otherwise they'd be as well to play recordings. I’d like to return to the stage but seems there’s little work open to an unestablished actress. Not in Paris anyway. Looks like I'm stuck behind the piano for the time being.
FRANZ. At least it’s nice for you to get paid for playing.
MARY. But it's dull being part of the furniture! You should really come in some time...
FRANZ. Perhaps I shall.
MARY. Perhaps.

In itself this passage shows Franz completely ignoring Mary’s aspirations; he is unable to pick up on her underlying feelings. All she wants is for him to show he cares by coming in to hear her play at work, and thus when she says “it’s dull being part of the furniture” it takes on a double meaning because she is heard but not listened to within his house as well.
This foreshadows the final scene play in which Franz finally does come into the café to hear her playing:

FRANZ. I always loved the way you played that Chopin étude.
MARY. Really? You never came in to hear it before, you always said perhaps.
FRANZ. Envious for the centre of attention no doubt.
MARY. Not that they pay any attention in here, I think you were overly optimistic.
FRANZ. Perhaps. Still, I'm sure you'd be sorely missed were you absent.
MARY. You think so?
FRANZ. I'm certain of it.

In a reversal of roles, Franz is now speaking of himself. He never paid her adequate attention when they were a couple but now that she’s gone the gap in his life is very apparent. Sometime during their separation Franz has become cognisant of Mary’s aspirations (as he mentions them for the first time in Scene 5) and the play ends with him offering her a role in one of his own plays, prompted (he says) by his director, although there is the suggestion that really she was really the original inspiration for the role.
Another, more subtle, example of self-reference within the script is that in the first scene Franz declares: “I’m simply unable to deliver under these conditions! No one cares what goes into it. No one cares how it works, just so long as it works.” Indeed, for Franz, creating is a difficult process involving much soul searching. Yet true to his prediction the Director of his plays has a strange faith in him demonstrated in this dialogue: 

FRANZ. I was always in awe of Da Ponte’s ability to structure a narrative, his use of multiple interweaving ironies in the libretto is most enviable...
DIRECTOR. Enviable? What nonsense my good fellow, that’s exactly the kind of level of complexity I can see you really getting a handle on in the following project.

The Director really means this as a compliment. He thinks Franz is a genius, but he hasn’t seen how difficult it was for Franz to produce the end product. His words only serve to compound the pressure which Franz is already placing upon himself to produce. Mary, on the other hand, when parting ways from Franz a second time, has the empathy to leave with the words, “Franz... your letters... I was dying when I read them…. And I knew you were dying when you wrote them... I just thought you should know.” Ultimately, she did know what went in to them.


A Play about doing what it does
        At heart, Like The Greeks is a play is about doing what the play itself does. Franz says of his own writing that the poet designs clothes for the philosopher to wear, and this play is to some degree philosophy dressed in theatre, as Sartre’s Nausea and Kierkegaard’s Either/Or were philosophy dressed in literature. For that reason it is written in a rather romantic vernacular (although notably I do not use dead language) because it seems more beautiful to me. I don’t think the play would have the same impact if it was written in common parlance rather than ‘backdated’ in this way.

               Franz practice describes my practice:

… I just started writing. It was like going for a walk in a dark forest: I didn’t know exactly where I was going, but I came to recognise this familiar tree and the other. Each was a concept or view that had entered my mind at some point and left again... Gradually they came into clarity like a thousand single points of light beyond the darkest dark. And as I weaved those points together in prose like a nebula into a star they gained greater significance by taking upon themselves the tone of the characters who spoke them, for they were not [necessarily] my own  opinions but simply combinations of words and ideas which I found aesthetic.”

            And Mary’s advice to him describes my approach:

“When we dig deep and be honest – well – we uncover gems that are valuable to others, whether we are trying to please or not.”

I sincerely hope this proves to be the case.

Thursday, 12 April 2012

Chateau de Thorne

I spent Wednesday  near Inverness with Euan, Abi, Sam and Fiona at "Chateau de Thorne," Sam's parents house.

It was a really awesome time where we lay back discussing matters lofty and low brow alike

Fiona and Abi read the script for Like The Greeks and really enjoyed it, I was very pleased with the feedback as LTG was very much written as "the play I'd like to see" so I didn't know how universal it would be but it seemed well liked.

Fiona and Euan gave us a proper read-through in character, which was great to hear, I have a recording of it and feel it will inspire a couple of tweaks to the script.

I started reading The Brothers Karamzov on the way there, and on the way back I sat next to a cool Austrian guy named Daniel who was reading The Fear of Freedom by Erich Fromm in German, so we started speaking on the Frankfurt School... bizarre coincidence as we were probably the only people on the bus who had even heard about it!

All in all a great week.

Sunday, 1 April 2012

Philosophy, then let do lunch.

Here are some aesthetically pleasing one liners I coined last night/this morning.


Perhaps for the fact that apologies are bandied about so needlessly the word sorry would still have some value in it, but as it stands too much counterfeit currency has flooded the redemption market.

I hate getting junk mail. Trees die for this crap.

There are many paths to freedom, as many as there are feet to walk them, but there is only one road away from
Slavery and that is to turn your back on what enslaves you and start walking.

do not speak of your own morality in comparison to that of others, anything said can only encourage you to bring down the average.

When mind comes aware of its habit of self-erosion, thoughts are construed as agent aggressors upon the canvas of the soul.

Tuesday, 27 March 2012

On The Abolition of Grades

On The Abolition of Grades by Antony Sammeroff

Foreword

Grades were first established as a means of assessment in the University of Cambridge in 1792, it is thought, after being developed as a system by William Farish.[1] Since that time their application to work submitted by students within educational institutions has become almost ubiquitous with exceptions often being considered fringe or at the margins. In cases where a system of grades does come into question, it is more often than not an assessment of how students should be graded rather than whether grading them is necessary at all, or even helpful. Writing as early as 1913 Finkelstein stated, “When we consider the practically universal use… of a system of marks... to indicate scholastic attainment of pupils... and remember how very great stress is laid by teachers and pupils alike upon these marks as real measures… of attainment, we can but be astonished at the blind faith that has been felt in the reliability of the marking system.”[2]

This enquiry will try to establish of what value, if any, grades have as an educational tool by assessing the most plausible arguments in their favour and contrasting those with reasons we may have to doubt their educational application. Logically it would seem that grades are either of superior educational value to other means of assessment (including in-depth feedback on work without a grade or pass/fail systems), of inferior value to them, or of equal value. There is a fourth position though, which is that that grades are of some negative educational utility. While establishing that grades are of inferior value to other forms of assessment would be sufficient to promote a strong argument for the abolition of grades on practical terms, this final position would philosophically compel a moral argument for the abolition of grades.

There are of course other considerations on the role of grades in education, such as the purpose of education, and whether basic pedagogic value is the only valid criteria for judging the utility of grades as a form of assessment in light of the economy, political and ideological considerations. These will also each be addressed to some appropriate extent where deemed necessary.


On the Question of Motivation.

Perhaps the most popular argument made in favour of a system of grades is that some students are motivated by them. While this is almost certainly true, before accepting this as justification for their use we must first call into question whether grades are a sound motivation for students in and of themselves. Psychologists (with the exception of behaviourists who are result-orientated and reject considerations of the inner environment) generally draw a distinction between extrinsic motivation, the desire to attain in order to receive perceived rewards, and intrinsic motivation, the desire to do something because it is perceived as innately worthwhile.[3] In the context of education Carol S. Dweck states, “Both goals are entirely normal and pretty much universal,” [4] although extensive research shows that a motivation to learn for the sake of learning is inversely related to a desire to learn for grade achievement.[5] Correlation does not prove cause, however, progressive pedagogue Alfie Kohn has written: “as far as I can tell, every study that has ever investigated the impact on intrinsic motivation of receiving grades… has found a negative effect.” [6] The evidence suggests that promoting a grade-driven orientation leads to a degradation of a learning-driven one. “While it’s not impossible for a student to be concerned about getting high marks and also to like what he or she is doing, the practical reality is that these two ways of thinking generally pull in opposite directions.”[7] If we accept intrinsic motivation as a virtue which a strong need for extrinsic motivation is less preferable to, then these findings seriously undermine the ‘motivation’ argument for using grades: grades create a dependence on extrinsic motivation and citing motivation as an argument to justify their use is analogous to prescribing an addictive substance because it relieves symptoms of addiction.

On the other hand, the argument can be made that extrinsic motivation is not necessarily a bad thing, in fact, this argument is often applied with a “students better get used to it” attitude in anticipation of the workplace, where employees may often need to reach targets and meet goals. Indeed, extrinsic motivations are a natural part of life: a child will need to put his toys away to enjoy playing with them, and an adult will have chores to do which are unappealing but for which the ends justify the means. The question is whether attempts to impose extrinsic motivations (such as grades) artificially in order to acclimatise individuals to them is in any way necessary or achieves desirable results. Students demonstrate less interest in learning as a result of being graded, “When students are told they’ll need to know something for a test or… that something they’re about to do will count for a grade – they are likely to come to view that task (or book or idea) as a chore.”[8] This stands to reason, as if grades are what motivate a student to learn then logically the same students ought not to be motivated to learn when they leave education and grades are not presented as an incentives for learning. Thus students are not really being acclimatised to natural extrinsic motivations, they are being socially conditioned to require unnatural, externally imposed ones and to perform tasks reluctantly for them. Returning to consideration of the workplace, can we honestly imagine that workers dependent on external rewards will make preferable employees to individuals who are self-motivated? It seems unlikely.

On the Question of Cultivating Habits of the Workplace through Education

Sometimes a social argument is made to the effect that education exists to prepare students for “the real world,” while at the same time offering a relatively harmless economic environment where, should they fall short of standards, they will not end up redundant or homeless. By “the real world” what is generally meant is the job market (as consideration for the “false world” of the home, family and social relationships rarely comes into education.) The argument continues that because governments pay for education, part of that education should be to cultivate within students the habits of the workforce to ensure their employability upon leaving education. The institution of grades is often seen to tie into these ends in some ways (being scarce, competitive, an indication of hard work, ability to respond to tasks imposed by an authority figure, and other qualities.) 
While the claim that the grade-performance will reflect the performance of students later in the workplace - a term that can be equally applied to a wide variety of employed activities each with varying demands that may radically differ from what is expected for the achievement of high grades in any system - strikes as highly suspect, let us accept the premise to explore the argument further.
If the habits which are desirable in work take precedence over quality of learning this only goes to denigrate the role of education to mere institutionalisation. If the marketplace demands certain habits then it seems only natural that it is the role of the marketplace to fund their cultivation. Whatever training increases the economic value of employees sufficiently will create a profit motive for employers to fund within their workforce in exchange for certain guarantees of loyalty. If it is not economically viable for industry to fund the cultivation of certain habits then, not only is it morally dubious for the government to subsidise private interests at the expense of the tax payer to produce the same, but they cannot seriously be considered to be the habits of the workplace as they are not of a net economic gain where it is concerned.

It should be noted that a better world is always possible and we cannot predict what the workplace of a future will look like in a society where the vast majority of individuals do not go through an education system which habituates them to extrinsic motivation. Ricardo Semler pioneered some work in this field by putting into practice a business model based on delegation where employees ran their own departments, interviewed, employed and assessed their own managers, set their own salaries and were not regulated for coming in late or leaving early.[9] The fact that Semler’s model was so successful it made him a millionaire who then went on to teach it to other entrepreneurs is evidence that so-called “idealistic” invitations to reform can be less resistant to the “real world” than meets the eye.

On the Question of Competition for Grades Promoting Achievement

A further argument in favour of grades is that competition between students for them will lead to higher achievement (also often compounded by the desire to habituate students to the harsh realities of a competitive economy.) While the case for competition is susceptible to many of the counterarguments already laid out regarding artificially applying extrinsic motivations where none are inherently necessary, and cultivating habits of the workforce in schools and universities, there are more to consider besides.

Firstly, if engineering a competitive inclination amongst students is desirable then there should be no reason why those efforts are limited to the grade results of assignments. The same habits could be cultivated (perhaps more effectively) by limiting the number of seats in lecture theatres and having students compete over them, or by limiting the amount of food available in lunch halls, for example. The end results of accepting such a premise is absurd, and in light of that fact, the only relevant consideration remaining is over whether competition for grades is of any pedagogical value. In a comprehensive review of 245 classroom studies, the findings of Johnson and Johnson at the University of Minnesota, were that 87 per cent of the time the advantage went to the cooperative approach.[10]

In the book “Awareness” philosopher and theologian Anthony De Mello discusses the example of an American doctor who went to a Swiss medical school where there were no grades, awards dean's list, and thus no competition. The doctor was quoted, “Some of us just couldn't take it… We thought there must be some kind of trick… Those who survived suddenly discovered a strange thing they had never noticed at American universities: students, brilliant ones, helping others to pass, sharing notes.”[11] A Hindu proverb states, “To learn, read. To know, write. To master, teach,” and the truth contained within this statement would suggest that brilliant pupils tutoring the less able would be of mutual benefit.  The same doctor’s son went to medical school in the United States and reported that people would often tamper with microscopes so that following students would have to spend three or four minutes readjusting them. [12] This gives pause to consider the sociological implications of falsely instituting competition where cooperation could yield more favourable results. It also conflates with research showing that the more students are driven to focus on getting good grades, the more likely they are to cheat.[13] One paper[14] said students were likely to view themselves as "chump[s]" for allowing ethical considerations to hinder academic achievement.[15]

Society can blame students for acting on the impulse to cheat while fostering an environment that incentivises it, but should exercise caution while doing so. Consider that much of what may constitute cheating in the classroom is often considered collaboration outside of it, something which offers its own distinct benefits, “The quality of students’ thinking has been shown to depend partly on the extent to which they are permitted to learn cooperatively”[16] found Johnson and Johnson.[17] Perhaps this because while cooperation is “marvellously successful at helping children to communicate effectively, trust in others and accept those who are different from themselves,”[18] competition moves student’s from attention from what they are supposed to be learning to how well they are performing in comparison to their peers. All in all “grading policies may create a competitive climate that is counterproductive… it discourages a free exchange of ideas and a sense of community that's conducive to exploration.” [19]

Finally, competition is often touted as in some way character building but this can only be the case if we consider a person of good character to be someone who views others as an obstacle to their success and only measures themselves in comparison to them rather than for their own intrinsic qualities. “Even winning doesn't build character; it just lets a child [or student] gloat temporarily... feelings of self-worth become dependent on external sources of evaluation...”[20]  

The Case Against Grades

Having deconstructed many of the popular arguments that favour a system of grades, I should like to present the conclusions which Alfie Kohn identified as the three most noticeable effects of such a system, outlined in his essays “From Degrading to de-Grading” (1999) and “The Case Against Grades” (2011).[21] Those are the following:

1)  Grades tend to diminish students’ interest in whatever they’re learning. Because their attention is now focused grade achievement rather than the content of what they are learning. They are also more likely to forget what they have learned in a short space of time where they are advised that they will be graded on their performance.[22]

2)  Grades tend to reduce students’ preference for challenging tasks while creating a preference for the easiest possible task.  This stands to reason because if the goal is to achieve a good grade then it is not rational to choose a task which will make such a grade more difficult to achieve.

3)  Grades tend to reduce the quality of students’ thinking. This is because they are more likely to simply learn what they “need to know” to succeed, and are less likely to raise questions over the information they are learning. “The highest achievement occurred only when comments were given instead of numerical scores.”[23]

There are also a number of other reasons we may have to reconsider the worthiness of grades. A grade alone says nothing about what a student understands, can or cannot do, and where they might need help, and yet often students get exam results in the form of a grade with no real feedback. A student may argue that grades give them an idea or how well or poorly they are doing, when in fact there is no indication of where they are doing well or poorly. What is more they are not particularly objective: one review of research on the topic showed that not only can any given assignment be given different grades by equally qualified teachers, but may even be given two different grades by the same teacher reading it at two different times.[24]  By creating a desire for objectively quantifiable criteria to mark students work on, grades can encourage an approach to teaching which radical pedagogue Paulo Freire called “The banking model of education” in which students are expected to be filled with information (often by the teacher) without critically appraising it.[25] Even when given alongside feedback, the grade can deemphasise feedback as it is considered to be the real measure of achievement and definitive goal, which devalues the role of the teacher to a mechanistic handling of letters. In this way one can “Confuse process and Substance” as pointed out by Ivan Illich in his insightful book Deschooling Society, “The pupil is thereby ‘schooled’ to confuse teaching with learning, grade advancement with education, a diploma with competence, and fluency with the ability to say something new.”[26] 

Grades (whether accompanied by feedback or otherwise) create a fear of failure even in students that achieve highly[27] and this can distract them from considering what value their work is of. White a recent study has shown that the elimination of grades in favour of a pass/fail system has produced substantial benefits in medical school with no apparent disadvantages.[28] 

Yale Law School says of its system which does not use grades (but still distinguishes between an honours pass and a low one for better or worse) states that their systems “allow a level of flexibility and freedom that is unparalleled.” where “Students can tailor their educations however they see fit…. Yale allows you to make your education truly yours without worrying about grade competition… the myriad of ways that students do this that allows them to be unique, to market themselves to prospective employers, and to secure the variety of jobs that lead to the many incredibly interesting careers... We compete not with each other, but with ourselves. We set our own goals, and we work hard to achieve them.”[29] Some may object to the abolition of grades on the grounds that students in schools will not take courses seriously or even ignore them, but this could as easily instead prompt an assessment of why any given course is not being well attended and thus significantly improve the standards of engagement within education.

The abolition of grades would not preclude all forms of critical assessment, and perhaps there are benefits to using grades which have not been considered in this paper, but in light of the evidence of their deleterious effects it seems reasonable always keep in the forefront of the mind the question of whether these benefits can be achieved equally by other means. “These include narratives (written comments), portfolios (carefully chosen collections of students’ writings and projects that demonstrate their interests, achievement, and improvement over time), student-led parent-teacher conferences, exhibitions and other opportunities for students to show what they can do.” Perhaps the removal of grades would encourage students to place more emphasis on creating a standard of work which they can be proud of rather than work which simply meets the external criteria necessary in order to receive a good grade.



[1]  Postman, N. (1992). “Technopoly: the Surrender of Culture to Technology” Vintage Books, New York, p. 13.
[2]  Finkelstein, I. E. (1913) "The marking system in theory and practice" Warwick & York, inc.
[3] Woolfolk, A., Hughes, M., Walkup, V. (2008) “Psychology in Education” Pearson Education Limited, p. 438-439.
[4] Dweck, C. S. (1999) “Self-Theories – Their Role in Motivation, Personality and Development” Columbia University.
[5] Kohn, A. (1999) “From Degrading to de-Grading” (Highschool Magazine, March 1999) cites all of Beck et al., 1991; Milton et al., 1986, Benware and Deci, 1984; Butler, 1987; Butler and Nisan, 1986; Grolnick and Ryan, 1987; Harter and Guzman, 1986; Hughes et al., 1985; Kage, 1991; Salili et al., 1976.
[6] Kohn, A. (2011) “The Case Against Grades” Educational Leadership, November 2011.
[7] Kohn, A. (1999) “From Degrading to de-Grading” Highschool Magazine, March 1999.
[8]  Kohn, A. (1999) “From Degrading to de-Grading” Highschool Magazine, March 1999.
[9]  Semler, R. (1993) “Maverick!” Warner Books.
[10]  Kohn, A. (1991) “Competition vs. Excellence” New York Times, April 26, 1991.
[11]  De Mello, A. (1990) “Awareness” Doubleday, New York, p91-92.
[12]  De Mello, A. (1990) “Awareness” Doubleday, New York, p92.
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[25] Freire, P. (1970) “Pedagogy of the Oppressed” New York: Continuum.
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Monday, 26 March 2012

My Article published on Radiuus

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